I finished A Feast For Crows by George RR Martin a couple days ago, after burning through A Storm of Swords and A Clash of Kings. Grew interested in the Song of Ice and Fire series after watching HBO's Game of Thrones. AFFC seems to be the least liked of all the books, and I can sort of see why, although I didn't hate it that much; part of that might be because I didn't have to wait six years for the next one! A Dance of Dragons comes out on the 12th, and I'm looking forward to it. [Spoilers ahead] The problem with AFFC, I think, is just the characters author George RR Martin focused on. With Asha, Cersei, Brienne, and even Arianne, there's just an overload of the whole “woman in a man's world” theme. It's sort of repetitive.
We see a lot of world building by Martin in this book, as we see various viewpoints of characters located in Dorne, the Iron Islands, and Oldtown, and an expansion of their various and unique societies and religions in those locations. That's fine, although I didn't quite get to the point where I fell in love with any of the characters we hopscotched briefly into the heads of. We are introduced to a lot of characters, but not all of them did much of note, and it remains to be seen what is done with the likes of Aeron and Garin and Erik Anvil-Breaker in subsequent books. As it is, it feels like all the happenings under the Kraken banner could've been summed up in much the same way they were in A Storm of Swords, in a little news report given to Cersei. In fact, I actually would've been more interested in seeing Asha's reaction to the news of his father's death in a Storm of Swords, more than seeing everyone telling her she can't be ruler while she stubbornly refuses to accept that.
Brienne, unfortunately, just isn't that deep of a character, even though she shows up a lot here. She has no idea where to look for Sansa, and never really picks up the trail of either sister. We explore her past a bit, none of it particularly revelatory, and yeah, there was always a chance she'd bump into Catalyn, there seemed like there was a higher chance of that happening than her finding either Stark sister. She's Ned without a purpose but with a constant reiteration of her sex and her looks, and if you're not doing anything interesting and you're not an inherently entertaining character then you're not going to make for very interesting chapters, especially if you're annoying. A Clash of Kings suffered through that in part, especially in the first half: Jon and Dany hadn't really established themselves yet, and it was seemed pretty obvious Martin was just stretching their journeys out, a sort of “well, it's probably time for another Jon chapter, but he can't do anything important yet, so let's just dive into his head for a bit.” In A Storm of Swords, of course, both characters really get to shine.
Back to AFFC: Cersei acts insane and paranoid, and we know that many of her conspiracy theories are false because we know how Tyrion really escaped, and we also have Jaime to call her a fool just to drive the point home; we already can't root for her because she's quite frankly one of the closest things to an antagonist the series has right now, and we can't even enjoy her political maneuverings because it's pretty evident that she's doing things wrong. Maybe I could've enjoyed her chapter more if her failings didn't have giant neon arrows pointing to them, and I could've patted myself on the back for figuring out how paranoid and foolish Cersei was being. Instead we have Jaime, who mostly mopes around during the beginning and points out how stupid Cersei is being in the most unproductive manner possible (just talk to Cersei! Or do something); once he gets out of King's Landing he becomes the most interesting part of the book. With so much world building, and so little purpose for these POV characters or actual events happening in the book, the big problem in a Feast of Crows is: there aren't any “fun” chapters anymore.
Earlier on in the series, Arya and Tyrion were the really fun to read POVs: they were purposeful, driven, energetic. They were going somewhere, at least. Tyrion seemed to enjoy the political gamesmanship, and Arya was likeable, and was always moving, and we couldn't wait for her to get to wherever it was she was going. In a Storm of Swords, Tyrion is a bit more of a downer, but Jaime took up the slack a bit. He's pretty bitter, and has a bit of an identity crisis here though.
Who else? Samwell is just seasick, just a chess piece that needs to be moved across the sea. Arya and Sansa don't get a lot of chapters, and both are stuck in pattern holding mode. Arya's going through some sort of spiritual journey/training, but is finally at the point where we aren't sure where her character wants to go next. The most obvious destination for her, of course, is the Wall, to Jon Snow, but she doesn't seem to want to go. I was hoping for a bit more from the Samwell/Arya meeting, but nope, nothing there (yet).
Sansa, like she's been doing all along, does very little other than evoke a tiny bit of sympathy from the readers. She's accepted her role as Littlefinger's daughter, which was pretty similar to her role as Joffrey's queen-to-be, too, and she works hard to keep a smile on her face, and that's about it. I wonder if the book might've worked a bit better if we'd seen the Vale from the POV of Littlefinger instead. Sansa adds little insight into the occurences around her, and we'd see a bit less of Robert-babysitting. Littlefinger is one of the few characters left who still seems completely in control, who holds power, who is purpose-driven, and who actually enjoys what he's doing, and I think he might've balanced out the book a bit in terms of tone. With Robb gone, the POV characters might be stretched a bit thin. ADWD contains most of the stronger characters, so hopefully that book will be even better (really, I still found AFFC readable enough. I don't regret reading it, at least, which some people apparently did).
Earlier on in the series, Arya and Tyrion were the really fun to read POVs: they were purposeful, driven, energetic. They were going somewhere, at least. Tyrion seemed to enjoy the political gamesmanship, and Arya was likeable, and was always moving, and we couldn't wait for her to get to wherever it was she was going. In a Storm of Swords, Tyrion is a bit more of a downer, but Jaime took up the slack a bit. He's pretty bitter, and has a bit of an identity crisis here though.
Who else? Samwell is just seasick, just a chess piece that needs to be moved across the sea. Arya and Sansa don't get a lot of chapters, and both are stuck in pattern holding mode. Arya's going through some sort of spiritual journey/training, but is finally at the point where we aren't sure where her character wants to go next. The most obvious destination for her, of course, is the Wall, to Jon Snow, but she doesn't seem to want to go. I was hoping for a bit more from the Samwell/Arya meeting, but nope, nothing there (yet).
Sansa, like she's been doing all along, does very little other than evoke a tiny bit of sympathy from the readers. She's accepted her role as Littlefinger's daughter, which was pretty similar to her role as Joffrey's queen-to-be, too, and she works hard to keep a smile on her face, and that's about it. I wonder if the book might've worked a bit better if we'd seen the Vale from the POV of Littlefinger instead. Sansa adds little insight into the occurences around her, and we'd see a bit less of Robert-babysitting. Littlefinger is one of the few characters left who still seems completely in control, who holds power, who is purpose-driven, and who actually enjoys what he's doing, and I think he might've balanced out the book a bit in terms of tone. With Robb gone, the POV characters might be stretched a bit thin. ADWD contains most of the stronger characters, so hopefully that book will be even better (really, I still found AFFC readable enough. I don't regret reading it, at least, which some people apparently did).
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